I need a beta

I finished my essay for ship_manifesto (due the 25th) and now need a beta. Anybody want to beta for me?

The essay is about 5-6 pages long at this point, and maybe needs to be a bit shorter. I really need someone to look over it and tell me what I need to fix. Knowledge of Kamen Rider Blade is appreciated but not required. (I am writing to an audience unfamiliar with the series, after all.)

One thing I've learned after rewatching the series? Nozomi is incredibly patient....