Quick fic

Sep. 9th, 2014 10:02 am
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I posted this to AO3 as chapter 16 of Something to Build. Here so that it's on DW.



Kouta was apt to slam his fist into walls when he thought nobody was looking. Michi paid careful attention; no matter how happy she was that Kouta had lost his Driver, he wasn't taking the loss well. As things went, she thought that Yggdrasill had treated him and Kumon Kaito well the two weeks they'd been in there, though she thought the scientist's attempt to give both of them new drivers was a little odd, given that Kouta had been visited by her brother shortly into his time there and told that he and Kaito weren't getting them back. She had to get into Yggdrasill and find out what was going on.

With Kouta and Kaito out of the picture, there were only four Armored Riders left; herself, Jonouchi of Team Invitto, Mr. Oren from the bakery, and her brother. Gaim hadn't needed its Ryugen, because Jonouchi was too busy learning how to bake and Oren was too busy trumpeting his win over the Beat Riders. And she hadn't used her Driver ever since finding out from Kouta that they were test subjects.

Now that everything was more or less back to normal, she had to make Kouta happy again, help him cope. She had the sense that her brother had tried to do just that; it was ironic, how he seemed to care more for her teammate than he did for her.

For the moment, though, she was happy that she was in her hoodie instead of her school uniform. She could pretend she wasn't one of the Kureshimas of Zawame city.

A van pulled up on the street, and Kurokage Troopers spilled out. The Troopers meant that there was a Crack nearby, no doubt, and that was the last thing she wanted to deal with. She started hurrying, hoping to get far away from where they were going.

Instead, they were heading towards her, and as she changed direction she realized that they weren't there for a Crack; they were there for *her*. It was her turn to be captured, just like Kouta and Kaito had before.

She had a few advantages at least, she thought as she started to run. She wasn't wearing armor, she was smaller, and she was faster. Even if she intended to be captured, she wouldn't do it without a fight.

Michi wasn't sure that she wanted to be captured, so she kept running, slipping into alleys and around obstacles too big for her would-be captors to avoid.

Finally, she lost them, shaking as she finally stopped. She had to think. She had to plan. She had to know more. She needed time.

She headed to Gaim. Even if her course was utterly predictable, she'd let Kouta protect her and maybe she'd figure out how to handle this.

Date: 2014-09-09 09:16 pm (UTC)
reka: A young man chewing on the lip of a milk bottle and thinking. (Thoughtful)
From: [personal profile] reka
Very interesting!

So this is a universe where Takatora never discovered Michi was Ryugen? And of course nobody told him he was ordering the capture of his own sister.

Interesting that Takatora met with Kouta and Kaito. Did he introduce himself? Canon makes me think that Kouta knew Micchy's family name before. I hope Kaito doesn't know Michi's family name because I think Kaito is suspicious enough to suspect that she's in on it. If Kaito was told that he wouldn't get his Driver back, I wonder if he'd take Ryouma up on his offer of new belts? Or at least try to steal one.

Date: 2014-09-10 02:24 am (UTC)
reka: An orange-haired girl sitting calmly on a bench. (Luna on the bench)
From: [personal profile] reka
Yeah. Not only does Kaito not trust Yggdrasil, but Ryouma doesn't bother to hide his untrustworthiness at all. The belt provides power, though, so I would assume he's not taking the seizure of his belt lying down.

And Kouta thinking Takatora isn't related to Michi makes sense. He knows she's from a wealthy background, but he still only really knows her in a Team Gaim context. It's pretty different. And he trusts her.

Poor Takatora. If he asked anyone in Yggdrasil to help him look for her, they'd be very confused. And since he visited the other test subjects, there's no reason he'd skip the third (unless there was some sort of emergency or something, I guess).

Date: 2014-09-10 03:30 am (UTC)
reka: Mutsuki looking downwards and closing his eyes. (Mutsuki)
From: [personal profile] reka
Kaito's a weird guy. Yeah.

Absolutely. Michi may come home late and not say much about it, but she always comes home. I can see Takatora taking Ryouma's offer to talk to #3 instead as a gesture that he should save his energy for worrying about Michi and saying something like "no, it's my responsibility and I'll do it."

(Michi could possibly pull off something by rearranging her hair and changing posture or something, but I don't know. Sorry, language ability has gone downhill tonight.)

Date: 2014-09-10 03:45 pm (UTC)
reka: A young girl looking down and closing her eyes while she talks. (Mana)
From: [personal profile] reka
I wonder where she'd let herself be captured, if it was semi-willingly. Home would be a good choice if Takatora was out, I think. Around school would possibly be less than optimal, since even if she'd already changed she'd still have her uniform on her person. If she has to leave it behind when she gets captured, Takatora would probably be very confused and concerned, since I assume she'd come home wearing her uniform mostly. Maybe she would have time to leave the bag at Gaim HQ, but I think taking it with her to Yggdrasil would also work because Takatora's not going to look through a captive's stuff. Being captured around Gaim HQ would just be bad.

Takatora would be distracted and he probably wouldn't think of looking closely at Michi-as-Gaim-member, I think. Takatora's a smart guy, but he doesn't always see what he doesn't expect.

(To quote Shakespeare, "A brother noble [] whose nature is so far from doing harms that he suspects none." Not that Takatora doesn't do harms, but he is such a straight shooter.)

Date: 2014-09-10 08:30 pm (UTC)
reka: Kind of a grin. (Luka)
From: [personal profile] reka
Ooh, the braids are an excellent idea. Anything that can change her profile will help. Does she wear braids for Gaim stuff normally? And did she walk home in her uniform with the braids in? Is that unusual for her? I'd assume the braids are not in a style appropriate for her image elsewhere, but she probably has ways to get home that avoid drawing attention already.

Was something said about Yggdrasil having full control of Zawame including any policing, or am I misremembering things? I'm sure they'd have to even if it wasn't explicitly said, at least. I hope for everyone's sake that Takatora doesn't look through some of those records himself. It's probably not his branch, but he might be able to get access to those records due to the nature of his branch. Or something. Corporate structure is not something I'm particularly knowledgeable about.

I'd also be really intrigued to know about Gaim's reaction. Kouta knows where she is, whereas when he was there nobody knew where he was.
Edited Date: 2014-09-10 11:57 pm (UTC)

Date: 2014-09-11 02:35 am (UTC)
reka: An orange-haired girl sitting calmly on a bench. (Luna on the bench)
From: [personal profile] reka
And it'll probably become obvious that Kouta knew Yggdrasil was hunting her as soon as someone asks where she is in his presence.

I don't know about Takatora. On one hand he can be a little hands-off, but on the other hand she's his little sister and he's responsible for her in a very personal way. It's a bad time for her to be missing. There are lots of things that could've happened to her besides kidnapping. I hope someone (i.e. Ryouma) planned how to handle Takatora in this. It seems tricky.

The braids sound terribly cute.

Date: 2014-09-11 04:09 am (UTC)
reka: A young man chewing on the lip of a milk bottle and thinking. (Thoughtful)
From: [personal profile] reka
I was just going to ask about Oren in this AU. He has a weird role as the oldest of the riders and also as a former soldier. He'd be terribly offended by Takatora mentally calling him a baker.

Ryouma probably doesn't have to do much to convince Michi not to tell Takatora the truth. Wouldn't stop her from threatening it if backed into a corner, but I think she'd much rather keep Takatora out of her life as much as possible. I'm not sure what kind of lie would appease Takatora and keep him at arm's length, though. It must feel weird to return back to just dancing and stuff.

Date: 2014-09-11 03:55 pm (UTC)
reka: A young man chewing on the lip of a milk bottle and thinking. (Thoughtful)
From: [personal profile] reka
Is Mai involved with trying to plan a rescue too? I'm sure Kouta doesn't want the team to get involved, but he can't argue that he should do it alone because of the driver anymore.

Yeah, there's probably at least some sort of surveillance around their house. They have money and Takatora is kind of Important.

I hope Takatora doesn't pull those records himself. Or somehow catch a member of Gaim snooping around Michi's known spots for clues about how she was taken (e.g. signs of a struggle). I wonder if anyone knows where she lives? Takatora would probably not be in the mood to talk very much to them anyway.

Ryouma is probably quite pleased that he gets two weeks to examine Michi in relative peace. Unfortunately, there's also Takatora and he's unfortunately the one who Takatora trusts most in his little rebel group. And he can't see him examine Michi.

(I wonder if Sagara would interfere in this AU. Since it seems that the reason Sagara interfered in canon was largely Mai's interference, I think it'd be hard to figure out without a sense of the future.)

Date: 2014-09-11 08:31 pm (UTC)
reka: A teenager in a suit with an emotionless expression. (Nowhere close)
From: [personal profile] reka
Doesn't want to be rescued, and especially doesn't want to be rescued by her brother. Michi wants to minimize how much this situation gets Takatora involved in her life. I wish we got more of Micchy's feelings about Takatora himself rather than what he represents in Micchy's life, but I think that's very teenagery. I think she'd prefer escaping herself to being rescued by anyone, but I'd imagine being in Yggdrasil allows her to gather information she hasn't had access to. And I assume Ryouma is very willing to feed her information and flatter her intelligence.

Date: 2014-09-11 10:40 pm (UTC)
reka: Mutsuki looking downwards and closing his eyes. (Mutsuki)
From: [personal profile] reka
Takatora is both parent and older brother, and I don't have any experience with that. My brother's only four years older than me, so there was never such a huge difference in where we were in life. I did get a little bit of a sense that he was less difficult than me because I wasn't paying attention during his adolescence, though. And none of my really close friends even have older siblings. I think Micchy feels even more like Takatora is this perfect shining model he's supposed to live up to somehow. And that Takatora can't possibly understand what he's dealing with. Partly it's because they're different people, and partly it's because Micchy was six years old when Takatora was sixteen.

That sounds like something Kaito would do. And something Michi would definitely not.

Takatora definitely knows where the cells are, considering he's visited them. I'd imagine that realizing he ordered Michi's capture would horrify him and that Sid and/or Ryouma would need to change their excuse a little.

Date: 2014-09-12 12:16 am (UTC)
reka: Kind of a grin. (Luka)
From: [personal profile] reka
Who supervises her meals? If it's an employee who Takatora doesn't know (which is probably almost everyone because he's a Big Boss), that person will at the very least be just as horrified as he is.

Re: I seem to be writing commentfic.

Date: 2014-09-12 02:46 am (UTC)
reka: A young girl looking down and closing her eyes while she talks. (Mana)
From: [personal profile] reka
I always enjoy commentfic!

It sounds like Michi is using her obedience to full effect. It's a good plan. I'd assume the technician who comes in with meals is lower on the totem pole than Ryouma's techs and is much less familiar with the driver technology. The soreness is interesting. Is he taking a larger quantity of blood than usual for lab stuff, or is Michi just particularly sensitive? The tech could also just be a little clumsy, but that would probably be less likely.

Michi doesn't mind not being alone as long as the person she's with isn't her brother, I bet. Poor Takatora. He probably feels really tricked by the whole situation. And it shows Michi's feelings about Gaim more than she'd ever admit to him.

Re: I seem to be writing commentfic.

Date: 2014-09-12 03:34 am (UTC)
reka: A woman with short dark hair looking a little confused and/or skeptical. (Default)
From: [personal profile] reka
My more visible elbow vein is too small for a blood donation needle, so when I donated blood the tech had a bit of trouble and I got some pretty dramatic bruising. I thought it was pretty cool. I unfortunately didn't tolerate the donation itself well and haven't done it since, so I can't compare. I've gotten a fair number of injections and things in my elbow vein, but nothing with a particularly big needle.

Yes, they all want to treat her as well as possible. And probably better when the people interacting with her realize she's that Kureshima, which I don't think she'll like.

Poor Michi. Hiding your face won't work when your identity is already on file.

Re: I seem to be writing commentfic.

Date: 2014-09-12 04:06 am (UTC)
reka: Kind of a grin. (Luka)
From: [personal profile] reka
Yeah, nobody else in my immediate family is able to give blood for various reasons. My dad's the real pity; he's AB-.

Not at all. You absolutely do not argue with the Big Boss if you want to stay employed. Especially when he's upset.

Michi might protest, but she also might feel like she can't. Takatora might try to work something out where he keeps an eye on her at home or get someone to come and stay with her. Or she could just get out and try to figure out what to tell Gaim. It might be really bad if they broke in to find her missing.

Re: I seem to be writing commentfic.

Date: 2014-09-12 03:10 pm (UTC)
reka: An orange-haired girl sitting calmly on a bench. (Luna on the bench)
From: [personal profile] reka
That plan could easily backfire and make Takatora even more hovery, but I'm sure Ryouma would back her up. It helps him and inclines Michi to think he's on her side. I think Takatora really just wants to take her back home and figure out what's been going on.

Re: I seem to be writing commentfic.

Date: 2014-09-12 08:41 pm (UTC)
reka: Kind of a grin. (Luka)
From: [personal profile] reka
It's so nice to see Takatora angry. I think it really shows something about his character that he's almost always in control of his emotions.

Man, Michi really is not that great at faking illness. If Takatora was a more skeptical person and the employees weren't invested in making absolutely sure that she was okay, I really doubt that would fly at all. Michi's smart, but faking is a completely different skill. Being able to lie to people who trust you 100% does not make you a good liar.

All the connections that Michi had made, gone in an instant.
This feels like the crux of Michi's resentment towards her brother. Micchy's, too.

Re: I seem to be writing commentfic.

Date: 2014-09-12 09:17 pm (UTC)
reka: An orange-haired girl sitting calmly on a bench. (Luna on the bench)
From: [personal profile] reka
A side effect that nobody else has for some reason, but hey, it's good to be careful. Has she ever used lockseeds for nutrition before? Poor Takatora. I wouldn't be surprised if it took a little while before he was willing to go home himself.

I don't envy Ryouma that job, but he's certainly clever enough to think of something. He could say that he didn't pay attention to her name, but that sounds flimsy and wouldn't get Sid off the hook at all. Not that Ryouma is above letting other people take the fall for him, just that I think he'd avoid using that up if he could.

Re: I seem to be writing commentfic.

Date: 2014-09-13 01:09 am (UTC)
reka: A young girl looking down and closing her eyes while she talks. (Mana)
From: [personal profile] reka
Not a bad tactic. If she joins Yggdrasil, does she still need to be weaned off her belt?

No matter what happened, I doubt Ryouma would let Takatora know Michi was faking.

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