Oooh, lovely! There’s something about the rhythm of the paragraphs, the repetition of phrases within sentences, that feels so appropriate to the slowly shifting architecture and the sense of doubling back and trying again. The sigh and the tired resignation of “someday she’ll be at the end of her journey, but she does not know when that is”…love it! Thank you!
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winterfish
Re: Shifting Shifty Paths (Monument Valley, worldbuilding)
Date: 2024-10-31 04:01 am (UTC)